When are you usually busy?

Nowadays, I'm not usually busy since I can manage my time in my pace. But when I worked in Korea, I was always busy to handle a task urgently. On occasion, my office was like battle fields. I had to have a meeting with my colleagues to cope with some difficult matters as soon as arriving to the office, and then I had to report the result for the meeting to a boss. But I enjoyed this situation personally, actually most of them were very interested to me and those experiences were very useful in working at the same organization for a long time.

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Teacher ELLY.

ESSAY QUESTION: When are you usually busy?

Nowadays, I\'m not usually busy since I can manage my time in my pace.

>>Nowadays, I\'m not usually busy since I can manage my time at my own pace.

But when I worked in Korea, I was always busy to handle a task urgently.

CORRECT!

or>>However, when I was a Korean employee, I often had a busy schedule to even have time handling another urgent task.

On occasion, my office was like battle fields.

>>On occasion, my office was like a battle field.

I had to have a meeting with my colleagues to cope with some difficult matters as soon as arriving to the office,

>>I had to have a meeting with my colleagues to cope with some difficult matters as soon as I arrived at the office.

and then I had to report the result for the meeting to a boss.

>>And then I had to report the result of the meeting to a boss.

But I enjoyed this situation personally.

CORRECT!

or>>But, personally, I relished this type of event.

actually most of them were very interested to me

>>Actually, most of them were very interesting to me.

and those experiences were very useful in working at the same organization for a long time.

>>And those experiences were very useful, when working at the same organization for a long time.