When can you say that the business competition is unhealthy?
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Unhealthy competition occurs when companies rely on unethical or harmful practices instead of fair market performance. This includes illegal tactics like spreading false rumors or bribery, predatory pricing aimed at driving out competitors, and monopolistic actions that block market entry. It also becomes unhealthy when businesses focus on suppressing rivals through lawsuits or political influence rather than innovating and improving their products.
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Hi, Jayjay!
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. Unhealthy competition occurs when companies rely on unethical or harmful practices instead of fair market performance.
>>CORRECT!
2. This includes illegal tactics like spreading false rumors or bribery, predatory pricing aimed at driving out competitors, and monopolistic actions that block market entry.
>>CORRECT!
OR >>This includes illegal tactics such as spreading false rumors or [engaging in] bribery, predatory pricing aimed at driving out competitors, and monopolistic actions that block market entry.
3. It also becomes unhealthy when businesses focus on suppressing rivals through lawsuits or political influence rather than innovating and improving their products.
>>CORRECT!
OR>>Competition also becomes unhealthy when businesses focus on suppressing rivals through lawsuits or political influence rather than innovating and improving their products.
>>For number 2, we add \"engaging in\" for parallelism.
>>For number 3, we bring back \"Competition\" for a clearer flow.
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