When did you last hang out with your friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I met them,we spent time talking about our daily life having some food.
Sometimes we visited the gallery
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Please take note of connectors and punctuation marks.
I love listening to your stories.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I met them,we spent time talking about our daily life having some food.
>> When I met them, we spent time talking about our daily life while having some food.
Sometimes we visited the gallery
Sometimes we visited the gallery
>> Sometimes, we also visit the gallery.
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