When did you last have an overnight stay in another city?
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When I went to a Bali, Indonesia for my honeymoon, I stayed many accommodation like a hotel, pension.
I had an overnight stay when the first day of honeymoon, because we arrived to Bali at midnight.
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When I went to a Bali, Indonesia for my honeymoon, I stayed many accommodation like a hotel, pension.>> When I went to Bali, Indonesia for my honeymoon, I stayed in many types of accommodation, such as hotels and pensions.
I had an overnight stay when the first day of honeymoon, because we arrived to Bali at midnight.
I had an overnight stay when the first day of honeymoon, because we arrived to Bali at midnight.
>> I had an overnight stay on the first day of our honeymoon because we arrived in Bali at midnight.
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