When did you think you were no longer a child? Share your ideas in writing.

Is the question for me? The question should be addressed to a high school student who just passed his/her adulthood. To me, the question should be like when do you think your daughter is no longer a child. Anyway, as a father, I now watch how my daughter grows and I often feel happy about her growth. However, I sometimes feel sad when I realize that I’m getting old as much as she is growing. She is climbing up to the hill of life and I’m descending it. I often raise a question to myself. What is aging? What does it mean to me? Is it getting to the end of life? Am I approaching the terminus? Unfortunately I’m getting weak and I actually notice the signs of the malfunction of my body. Although we can deter the aging process by balanced diet and regular exercise, you will be eventually getting sick as you are getting old. No one can avoid aging. So what should we do and how should we live? My answer is LIVE IN THE MOMENT. There is no magic solution to the issue of aging.

Good evening to you Sir [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework today. Actually, the question is for you. I just want to ask you when was the time you felt that you were no longer a child. It is somewhat reminiscing the past, the times you became more mature in dealing with issues about life. But of course, thank you so much for your effort and time to compose wonderful sentences. I also feel that way as I grow older. I\'m scared of losing my mom. We can talk more about this in class. Kindly go over the corrections below and work on the structure of your sentence. See you! Take Care! Teacher Nina   Is the question for me? >> Correct >> OR: Is the question really for me? The question should be addressed to a high school student who just passed his/her adulthood. >> The question should be addressed to a high school student who just had his/her adulthood. To me, the question should be like when do you think your daughter is no longer a child. >> Correct >> Better: To me, the question should be like: When do you think your daughter is no longer a child? Anyway, as a father, I now watch how my daughter grows and I often feel happy about her growth. >> Correct >> Better: Anyway, as a father, I know watch how my daughter grows and I often feel about it. However, I sometimes feel sad when I realize that I’m getting old as much as she is growing. >> Better: However, I sometimes feel sad when I realize that I\'m getting older as she grows up. She is climbing up to the hill of life and I’m descending it. >> She is climbing to the hill of life and I\'m descending on it. I often raise a question to myself. >> Correct What is aging? >> Correct What does it mean to me? >> Correct Is it getting to the end of life? >> Correct >> OR: Is it getting to final stage of life? Am I approaching the terminus? >> Correct Unfortunately I’m getting weak and I actually notice the signs of the malfunction of my body. >> Did you mean: Unfortunately, I\'m getting weak and I actually notice the signs of aging. >> OR: Unfortunately, I\'m getting week and I actually notice how some of the parts of my body are malfunctioning. Although we can deter the aging process by balanced diet and regular exercise, you will be eventually getting sick as you are getting old. >> Although we can deter the aging process by eating a balanced diet and regular exercise, you will eventually get sick as you are getting older. >> OR: Although, we can prevent the aging process by eating a well balanced diet and regular exercise. You will eventually get sick as you grow older. No one can avoid aging. >> Correct So what should we do and how should we live? >> Correct My answer is LIVE IN THE MOMENT. >> My answer is LIVE AT THE MOMENT. >> OR: My answer is live life to the fullest. There is no magic solution to the issue of aging. >> Correct