When do children leave their parents\' home in your country?
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Here are my corrections for you:
In my country, usally 25 years old leave from their parents.
>> In my country, they usually leave their parent\'s house at the age of 25.
They starts to the work. and then they will alone live in rental house.
>> They start to work. and live alone in a rental house.
In my case, actually, I Independent 20years old.
>> In my case, actually, I started to be independent when I was 20 years old.
since then, I am not receive petty cash from my parents.
>> Since then, I haven\'t received any cash from my parents.
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