When do I have the most energy?

2022-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think I have the most energy at work after breakfast. Maybe between 9 am and 12 am. A lot of work waits for me when I go to work in the morning. So I work hard when I have a lot of energy and power. However, I start to get tired by the time I finish my work.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!
Thank you for the valuable attempt.
I always appreciate your efforts!
Stay safe!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think I have the most energy at work after breakfast.
>> Correct
Maybe between 9 am and 12 am.
>> Maybe, it\'s between 9 am and 12 pm.
A lot of work waits for me when I go to work in the morning.
>> Correct
So I work hard when I have a lot of energy and power.
>> Correct
However, I start to get tired by the time I finish my work.
>> Correct

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