When do people make wishes in your culture?

Great evening Sir [이름]!

It\'s nice to hear that you ate dinner in a restaurant.

I hope that you will have something special again tomorrow.

Thank you very much for your time to write an essay.

I love making a wish.

Especially during New Year\'s Day.

I sometimes disappointed because some of them are difficult to work on.

But you are right! We should work harder and be passionate to reach our dreams.

So, we as partners in learning English shouldn\'t give up.

I will always be here to listen to your thoughts about various topics.

Thanks for being a wonderful student.

Teacher Nina

People tend to make wishes when they see a shooting star.

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People make a wish before they blow out the candles on a birthday cake.

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Korean people wish on the full moon.

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>> OR: Korean people make a wish during full moon.

When we go on a picnic to a field, we look for four leafed clovers and make a wish when they are found.

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>> OR: When we go on a picnic to a field, we look for a four leafed clovers and make a wish when they are found.

We toss a penny into fountains to make wishes come true. 

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>> OR: We toss a penny into fountains to make our wishes come true.

All of us have dreams or wishes that aren’t really realistic.

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What they are are nice ideas that we’ll never ever have the motivation to do because we don’t really care that much.

>> Did you mean: What nice ideas they are that we’ll never ever have the motivation to do because we don’t really care that much.

Plenty of us want to be famous and be millionaires, but do we actually take steps to make that happen?

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No. So we need to decipher between those goals that we actually want and those that just sound nice.

>> Did you mean: We need to decipher between those goals that we actually want and those that just sound nice.

Odds are we\'ll be able to recognize when we\'re passionate about something.

>> Did you mean:  It is odd. We\'ll be able to recognize it when we\'re passionate about something.

If it\'s something we find ourselves thinking about every day and can\'t imagine not having in the future, this could be something to hold onto and make a real effort to make them come true.

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