When do people make wishes in your culture?

2016-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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When we blow out birthday candles, see shooting stars, or find stray eyelashes, we tend to make a wish immediately. We make a wish as watching a full moon. We throw a coin in the fountain and wish for happiness. A lot of people go to mountains, beaches or shores where they can see the first sun rise on a new year’s day and make wishes. Wishes are something that we all have and we all make. While our wishes are often small and practical, they can also be big and fantastical. Wishes can also be very personal and important to the innermost parts of who we are. Have you ever wished that your one true love would come your way? If you find yourself fighting a life-threatening illness, your greatest wish may be for your health to be restored. Do wishes ever come true? Sometimes it's just chance. Other fulfilled wishes might be the result of simple hard work. Still other wishes might come to fruition as a result of kind-hearted people. The important thing is we need to make an effort.

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I hope all of your wishes will come true, Sir [이름]. ^^ I wish you good health and success in life. You are definitely right! We should also make an effort to make our wishes come true. It is not just about luck or about chance. We have to do something, right? I suddenly realized that I didn\'t make a wish during my birthday. Hihihi. Thanks for your marvelous composition. See you in class. Teacher Nina   When we blow out birthday candles, see shooting stars, or find stray eyelashes, we tend to make a wish immediately. >> correct We make a wish as watching a full moon. >> correct We throw a coin in the fountain and wish for happiness. >> correct A lot of people go to mountains, beaches or shores where they can see the first sun rise on a new year’s day and make wishes. >> correct Wishes are something that we all have and we all make. >> correct While our wishes are often small and practical, they can also be big and fantastical. >> correct Wishes can also be very personal and important to the innermost parts of who we are. >> correct Have you ever wished that your one true love would come your way? >> correct If you find yourself fighting a life-threatening illness, your greatest wish may be for your health to be restored. >> correct Do wishes ever come true? >> correct Sometimes it\'s just chance. >> correct Other fulfilled wishes might be the result of simple hard work. >> correct Still other wishes might come to fruition as a result of kind-hearted people. >> correct The important thing is we need to make an effort. >> correct

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