When do you feel happy the most?
학생이 쓴 원문
I feel happy when I start eating something delicious. Recently I was happy eating ice cream after finishing my swimming class. I felt hot and hungry and I didn\'t feel guilty at all because I exercised. It was a perfect moment.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Seoung [이름]!~
I am glad to know that you found a food that can uplift your mood ^^ Learning small things about yourself can help you a lot, especially when it comes to stress relievers ~
Chammy
I feel happy when I start eating something delicious.
Recently I was happy eating ice cream after finishing my swimming class.
I felt hot and hungry and I didn\'t feel guilty at all because I exercised. It was a perfect moment.
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