When do you feel most energized? What do you like to do with that energy?

2024-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Ryka

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I usually feel energatic on friday. it\'s a friday\'s magic. I feel I have almost three days holidays. so, it could make me feel energatic and happy. On Friday, I usually do more watching tv or playing a game than other days.

강사 첨삭

Hey [이름]! Thank you for sharing the times when you feel most energized. Being energetic is a great feeling to finish a lot of things we enjoy doing!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I usually feel energatic on friday. it\'s a friday\'s magic.
>>I usually feel energetic on Fridays. It\'s Friday\'s magic.

I feel I have almost three days holidays. so, it could make me feel energatic and happy.
>>I feel like I have almost three days of holidays, so it makes me feel energetic and happy. 

On Friday, I usually do more watching tv or playing a game than other days.
>>On Fridays, I usually watch more TV or play more games than on other days.

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