When do you feel the most powerful? What about the least powerful?
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강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Sir [이름]!
Happy Wednesday!
I guess you are right, the happiest country is not a wealthy country, but the poor.
I noticed something when I was in the capital city of the Philippines.
It was a holiday, I think Christmas. I saw people who live in the village with extravagant decors inside and outside their houses. But the place is very quiet.
While I was on the bus, I saw poor people who live nearby the street who have just one d�cor but they were all laughing.
And that me realized, material things don\'t really make people happy.
Being powerful has pros and cons too.
Having a lot of money and power makes the person arrogant or disrespectful.
However, if you don\'t have that much power you will be sensitive enough to the feelings of other people.
What an interesting topic! See you in class. Thanks for your composition.
Teacher Nina
I am a bit too ambitious when it comes to having power.
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I always feel like that I'm a powerless person and wish to have more power or wealth.
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When I have a conflict with my boss or colleagues, I wish I could have more power.
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When I see my people around me who are in a desperate need physically or financially, but there is nothing I can do, I feel powerless.
>> When I see my people around me who are desperate that need help physically or financially, but there is nothing I can do, I feel powerless.
Looking at myself objectively and compared to other ordinary people, I can say that I'm a little bit above the par in terms of annual income, social status, and having power.
>> Looking at myself objectively and comparing myself to ordinary people, I can say that I'm a little bit above the par in terms of annual income, social status, and having power.
However, I feel like I belong to the middle or lower class.
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All of these feelings are a matter of how you evaluate yourself.
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If you are not contented with what you have, you will always feel like you are deprived of and own less than others.
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Happiness lies on how you think.
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There are so many people who still feel happy even if they are poor and even physically challenged.
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According to the survey, the happiest country is not a wealthy country, but the poor.
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