When do you have family reunions?
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When do you have family reunions?
We have family reunions when it is the thanksgiving day, the lunar New Year`s day, the ancestor`s deathday. and we have family reunion to trim the plants and grasses on the graves of ancestors.
How close are you to your extended family?
We talk about family member`s health and the recently conditions each other over drink together. but it is getting hard to close my extended family.
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When do you have family reunions?
We have family reunions when it is the thanksgiving day, the lunar New Year`s day, the ancestor`s deathday. and we have family reunion to trim the plants and grasses on the graves of ancestors.
>>> We have family reunions on Thanksgiving day, the Lunar New Year`s day, the ancestor`s death day. We spend time with the family to trim the plants and grasses on the graves of ancestors.
We have family reunions when it is the thanksgiving day, the lunar New Year`s day, the ancestor`s deathday. and we have family reunion to trim the plants and grasses on the graves of ancestors.
>>> We have family reunions on Thanksgiving day, the Lunar New Year`s day, the ancestor`s death day. We spend time with the family to trim the plants and grasses on the graves of ancestors.
>>> OR: We have family reunions on Thanksgiving day, the Lunar New Year`s day, the ancestor`s death day. During those family reunions, we trim the plants and grasses on the graves of ancestors.
How close are you to your extended family?
We talk about family member`s health and the recently conditions each other over drink together. but it is getting hard to close my extended family.
We talk about family member`s health and the recently conditions each other over drink together. but it is getting hard to close my extended family.
>>> We talk about family member`s health and their recent conditions over a drink. But recently, it is getting hard to be close to my extended family.
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