When do you need your family most?
학생이 쓴 원문
I need my family when I face important situation like a wedding, born, accident.
Family give me helpful advice and also give actual help.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^^
Thank you for being diligent in doing your homework. Our family is always there when we truly need help.
Have a good night!
~Kelly
I need my family when I face important situation like a wedding, born, accident.>> I need my family when I face an important situation like a wedding, childbirth, or when there is an accident.
Family give me helpful advice and also give actual help.
Family give me helpful advice and also give actual help.
>> Family gives me helpful advice and also gives actual help.
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