When do you prefer having a family gathering?
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I want to go to the vacation with my nuclear family in summer and winter.
>>I want to have a vacation with my nuclear family in summer and winter.
When I was elementary school student, we often went trip anywhere.
>>When I was an elementary school student, we used to travel anywhere.
Among the experiences, I have loved to play in water.
>>Among these experiences, I have loved to play in winter.
I\'m memorable I traveled some island in domestic or other country.
>>It\'s a memorable experience when I travel to a domestic or international island.
We went abroad to join vacation annually.
>>We went abroad annually to join some vacation.
They are amazing experience.
>>They are amazing experiences.
I can\'t forget to eye-contact with the fishes during snorkeling,
>>I can\'t forget an eye-to-eye contact with some fish during snorkeling.
I can\'t forget the row tuna\'s taste on the boat on the sea.
>>I can\'t forget the taste of raw tuna while we were on the boat.
I can\'t forget the emerald color water when I\'m in the sea.
>>I can\'t forget the emerald color of the sea.
The vacation in abroad had different mood. It can\'t explain through word. I love the romantic mood.
>>My vacation abroad gave me a different mood. It\'s unexplainable. I love the romantic mood.
Now that I was grown adult, I can\'t go vacation abroad with all family members, because my parent have different trip preference.
>>Now that I am an adult, I can\'t go abroad with all my family members because my parents have different preferences in traveling.
We even have hard time to go to the domestic vacation.
>>We even have a hard time where to travel domestically.
I still try to go to the sea or water park with friends.
>>I still go to the beach or the water park with my friends.
I hope I have this vacation with my family members as many as possible.
>>I hope I have much time to spend my vacation with my family.
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