When do you prefer having a family gathering
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Hi gelly. sorry for late homework^^;
Last night, I had to book a fligjt and hotel for my famliy trip to macao on october.
And I want to daily homework from today.
(Homework)
I prefert to have a family gathering at dinner time on friday and saturday. Because I have no enogh time during weekday, I feel more comfortable at friday and saturday night.
And family can share a lot of conversation during meal times.
I like to invite family to my house and cook for them also. When I invite family to my house, I usually cook various asian foods. I can\\\'t explian the food detals, so I uploaded photos of foods that I cooked. Food lists are below^^
1. Bulgogi
2. Kimchi Fried Rice
3. japaness nabe
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Wow! Sophia, so impressive of your cooking skills! I think those foods are very delicious. I wanna try them ^^ ~ T.Gelly
I prefert to have a family gathering at dinner time on friday and saturday.
>> I prefer to have a family gathering at dinnertime on Fridays and Saturdays.
Because I have no enogh time during weekday, I feel more comfortable at friday and saturday night.
>> Since I don\'t have enough time during weekdays, that\'s why it\'s convenient to do it every Friday and Saturday night.
And family can share a lot of conversation during meal times.
>> As we know, family shares a lot of great conversations during mealtime.
I like to invite family to my house and cook for them also.
>> I like inviting my family to my house and for them.
When I invite family to my house, I usually cook various asian foods.
>> When I invite them, I usually cook various of Asian foods.
I can\\\'t explian the food detals, so I uploaded photos of foods that I cooked.
>> I cannot really explain the details of the foods I\'m cooking, so I just uploaded some of them.
Food lists are below^^
1. Bulgogi
2. Kimchi Fried Rice
3. japaness nabe
>> They are Bulgogi, Kimchi Fried Rice, and Japanese Nabe.
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