When do you prefer having a family gathering?
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer family gatherings when good things bring up me. I want to take deeped congratulation.
Also when I am in sad or hard, I want to have a family gathering. Because I need [이름]cere consolation.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ms. [Name]!
I prefer family gatherings when good things bring up me.
>>> I prefer family gatherings when good things come/happen to me.
I want to take deeped congratulation.
>>> I want to receive deep congratulations.
Also when I am in sad or hard, I want to have a family gathering. Because I need [이름]cere consolation.
Also when I am in sad or hard, I want to have a family gathering. Because I need [이름]cere consolation.
>>> Also, when I am in a sad or hard situation, I want to have a family gathering because I need [이름]cere consolation.
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