When do you prefer having a family gathering?

2023-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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1. In holiday New Year\'s Day and Chuseok are the biggest holidays in Korea. In the past, I had a \"Je sa\" or \"cha rae\" for my deceased family, You can think it as a similar day to \"Memorial Day\" held abroad. But these day, As Korean culture changed, the turn became an option, and on holidays, it became just a family meal. 2. In the afternoon or dinner When my father come to korea, We always eat out in the afternoon. I think the relationship between the family is getting better as they eat out while having a deep conversation with the family. I am always happy when I have a family gathering because my family is close.

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1. In holiday
New Year\'s Day and Chuseok are the biggest holidays in Korea.

>>> correct
In the past, I had a \"Je sa\" or \"cha rae\" for my deceased family,

>>> correct
You can think it as a similar day to \"Memorial Day\" held abroad.

>>> You can think of it as a similar day to \"Memorial Day\" held abroad.

But these day, as Korean culture changed, the turn became an option, and on holidays, it became just a family meal.

>>> But these day, as Korean culture changed, the ritual became an option, and on holidays, it became just a family meal.

2. In the afternoon or dinner
When my father comes to Korea, we always eat out in the afternoon.

>>> correct
I think the relationship between the family is getting better as they eat out while having a deep conversation with the family.

>>> I think the relationship between the family is getting better as they eat out while having a deep conversation with each other.

I am always happy when I have a family gathering because my family is close.

>>> correct

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