When do you prefer having a family gathering?
학생이 쓴 원문
\"I prefer having a family gathering during Korean traditional holidays.
Gathering during Korean traditional holidays feels more precious of family.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Jane!
Family is our home and where love and warmth abounds. Spending our time with them on holidays is creating good memories.
I hope that you and your family will have wonderful holidays all together this year and for the coming years.
There is only one grammar suggestion on your second sentence. Well done!
See you.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Gathering during Korean traditional holidays feels more precious of family.
>> Gathering during Korean traditional holidays feels more precious with the family.
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