When do you prefer to have a family gathering?
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When do you prefer to have a family gathering?
I prefer to have a family gathering on my birthday because they celebrate me with good words and gifts. I also like to eat birthday cake.
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Hello!
Thank you for completing your homework! This kind of activity helps you to stay on track. Make English speaking and/or writing a daily habit of yours. It only seems impossible until it’s
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Teacher Lexie
I prefer to have a family gathering on my birthday because they celebrate me with good words and gifts.
>> I prefer to have a family gathering on my birthday because we celebrate it with good words and gifts.
I also like to eat birthday cake.
>> I also like to eat a birthday cake.
>> I also like to eat a birthday cake.
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