When do you usually give gifts in your country ?
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Koreans usually give and receive the gift thier birthday between friends.
However, lovers give a gift not only birthday but another day.
For example they give a gift on Christmas or aniversary day for them.
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Koreans usually give and receive the gift thier birthday between friends.
>> Koreans usually give and receive gifts on their birthdays between friends.
However, lovers give a gift not only birthday but another day.
>> However, couples give gifts not only on birthdays but also on other special days.
For example they give a gift on Christmas or aniversary day for them.
>> For example, they exchange gifts on Christmas or on their anniversary.
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