When do you usually hesitate to share your suggestions?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m used to listening carefully first and then responding to the topics rather than proactively sharing my suggestions. I don\'t usually want to express opinions to force people to do them. However, when it comes to important matters, I show my opinions properly. In my experience, I feel comfortable when I advise to younger people than order people, like parents and professors. On top of that, I\'m reluctant to share my suggestions when others seem to be offended or I don\'t know about something well. In the future, I want to become a person who can help people with my suggestions more than now.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
You expressed your thoughts very well and did a fantastic job explaining your reflective approach to communication! Your self-awareness about listening first is a great strength, and you structured your ideas very clearly. Great work there!
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
I\'m used to listening carefully first and then responding to the topics rather than proactively sharing my suggestions.
~ CORRECT.
I don\'t usually want to express opinions to force people to do them.
~ I don\'t usually want to express my opinions in a way that forces people to follow them.
However, when it comes to important matters, I show my opinions properly.
~ However, when it comes to important matters, I express my opinions clearly.
In my experience, I feel comfortable when I advise to younger people than order people, like parents and professors.
~ In my experience, I feel more comfortable advising younger people than older people, like parents and professors.
On top of that, I\'m reluctant to share my suggestions when others seem to be offended or I don\'t know about something well.
~ On top of that, I\'m reluctant to share my suggestions when others seem offended or when I don\'t know a topic very well.
In the future, I want to become a person who can help people with my suggestions more than now.
~ In the future, I want to become a person who can help people with my suggestions even more than I do now.
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