When do you usually need a hand?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I need a hand from someone when I am in trouble and hurt. For example, I rode a bicycle when I went to middle school. I crashed a car while I went to the school when I rode a bicycle. Fortunately, that was not a big traffic accident but I needed a hand when I got a traffic accident at that moment.
강사 첨삭
Do Hyun!
Thank you for sharing this.
Take care always because you don\'t know when will you be needing a hand.
What about you do you help someone who needs a hand?
See you later!
T. Aki~
I think I need a hand from someone when I am in trouble and hurt.
>>> CORRECT!
For example, I rode a bicycle when I went to middle school.
>>> CORRECT!
I crashed a car while I went to the school when I rode a bicycle.
>>> I crashed into a car while going to school.
>>> My bicycle crashed into a car while going to school.
Fortunately, that was not a big traffic accident but I needed a hand when I got a traffic accident at that moment.
>>> Fortunately, that was not a big traffic accident but I needed a hand at that moment.
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