When does it rain?
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I can't live in Korea.I am really hot now.Staying at home is hot and going outside is really hot too.It didn't rain over 2weeks.Because of the sunset I always sleepy.Because of the hot day the mosquito was gone.I am starving now.My energy was horrible.
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I can\'t live in Korea.
>> Correct
or
>> I can\'t live in Korean anymore.
I am really hot now.
>> I feel really hot now.
or
>> It feels really hot now.
Staying at home is hot and going outside is really hot too.
>> Correct
It didn\'t rain over 2weeks.Because of the sunset I always sleepy.
>> It hasn\'t rained for two weeks. Because of the sunset, I always feel sleepy.
Because of the hot day the mosquito was gone.
>> Because of the hot weather, mosquitos are gone.
I am starving now.
>> Correct
My energy was horrible.
>> My energy is low.
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