When hiking
학생이 쓴 원문
I prepare snacks and some food whenever I hike mountains. Apples are my favorite food,for they contain much juice and moisture. And I prepare sunblock items. A hat and sunglasses are essential to hike. Sometimes I bring a raincoat or an umbrella in case of it rains.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
Great job with your homework! Have a safe travel and hiking. I hope you enjoy your time with your friends.
-T. Caitlyn
I prepare snacks and some food whenever I hike mountains.
>> CORRECT
Apples are my favorite food, for they contain much juice and moisture.
>> CORRECT
And I prepare sunblock items.
>> CORRECT
A hat and sunglasses are essential to hike.
>> A hat and sunglasses are essential for hiking.
Sometimes I bring a raincoat or an umbrella in case of it rains.
>> CORRECT
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