When I am alone

2023-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jhozel

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When I\'m home or in the second house, I usually have binge watching on Netflix. Last month I bingewatched \"Emily in Paris \" . Recently I watched all of the episodes of The Glory. The drama is a Korean drama which is based on the real story about school violence. One day I had a binge watching for six hours.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Gi [이름]!
I hope I can binge watch too! Haha
Anyways, thank you for taking the time to do your homework. :D
-T.Jhozel 
When I\'m home or in the second house, I usually have binge watching on Netflix.
>> Correct!
OR: 
I usually binge watch Netflix when I\'m at home or in the second house.
Last month I bingewatched \"Emily in Paris \" . 
>> I binge watched \"Emily in Paris\" last month.
Recently I watched all of the episodes of The Glory. 
>>  Correct!
The drama is a Korean drama which is based on the real story about school violence. 
>> Correct!
OR: 
The Korean drama is based on a true story about school violence.
One day I had a binge watching for six hours.
>> I binge-watched for six hours one day.

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