When I ate too much and ate too little.

2023-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I ate 4 servings of samgyeobsal with my brother on vacation a few months ago, and when we came home, we ate three ramen noodles, two breads, and a liter of Coke. It was when I ate too much seriously. Another time I eat too little is when I haven\'t eaten anything for a day. I had no appetite that day, so I only ate water and no other food.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


I ate 4 servings of samgyeobsal with my brother on vacation a few months ago, and when we came home, we ate three ramen noodles, two breads, and a liter of Coke. 
>>> I ate 4 servings of samgyeoPsal with my brother on vacation a few months ago, and when we came home, we ate three ramen noodles, two pieces of bread, and a liter of Coke. 
 
It was when I ate too much seriously. 
>>> CORRECT!

Another time I eat too little is when I haven\'t eaten anything for a day. 
>>> CORRECT!

I had no appetite that day, so I only ate water and no other food.
>>> CORRECT!

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