When I do homework
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During a semester, it is very difficult to finish every homework much earlier than a deadline. For me, I had lots of homework from different classes and they had different deadlines. So, before I got started, I had to check the deadlines and prioritize among them in order. I don\'t think it is a kind of behavior to procrastinate homework, but one of my habits when I do something. Actually, coming semester is my last semester, so I think there is not going to be lots of homework, but there must be lots of things such as writing a resume, certificate test, and so on. As I did, I need to prioritize which one is more important and which one is not. When I think it wider in to my life, it is the same to everything whenever I\'m at the crossroads. Anyway, the lesson is we have to know what is the most important.
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1. During a semester, it is very difficult to finish every homework much earlier than a deadline.
>>During a semester, it is very difficult to finish every homework much earlier than the deadline.
>>During a semester, it is very difficult to finish every homework much earlier than the deadline.
2. For me, I had lots of homework from different classes and they had different deadlines.
>>For me, I had lots of homework from different classes and they had various deadlines.
>>For me, I had lots of homework from different classes and they had various deadlines.
3. So, before I got started, I had to check the deadlines and prioritize among them in order.
>>So, before I started, I had to check the deadlines and prioritized among them and then put them all in order.
>>So, before I started, I had to check the deadlines and prioritized among them and then put them all in order.
4. I don\'t think it is a kind of behavior to procrastinate homework, but one of my habits when I do something.
>>I don\'t think it is a good behavior to procrastinate homework, but it is one of my habits when I do something.
>>I don\'t think it is a good behavior to procrastinate homework, but it is one of my habits when I do something.
5. Actually, coming semester is my last semester, so I think there is not going to be lots of homework, but there must be lots of things such as writing a resume, certificate test, and so on.
>>Actually, coming semester is my last semester, so I think there is not going to be lots of homework, but there must be lots of things to do such as writing a resume, certificate test, and so on.
>>Actually, coming semester is my last semester, so I think there is not going to be lots of homework, but there must be lots of things to do such as writing a resume, certificate test, and so on.
6. As I did, I need to prioritize which one is more important and which one is not.
>>CORRECT
OR>>As I did, I have to prioritize which one is more important and which one is less.
>>CORRECT
OR>>As I did, I have to prioritize which one is more important and which one is less.
7. When I think it wider in to my life, it is the same to everything whenever I\'m at the crossroads.
>>When I think something is wider or bigger than my life, I try to get through it and it is the same to everything, whenever I\'m at the crossroads.(I don\'t quite get this.^^)
8. Anyway, the lesson is we have to know what is the most important.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Anyway, the lesson is we have to know our priority in life.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Anyway, the lesson is we have to know our priority in life.
Nice thought.
- T. Melody ^^
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