When I eat out...
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I am very hungry to write about the topic.
>> It makes me hungry to write about this topic.
I usually eat noodles when I have an eat out.
>> I usually order noodles when I eat out.
For example, spaghetti or noodles.
>> I have a choice between spaghetti and noodles.
My family and I have different tastes in food, so we often argue when we go out to eat.
>> All the members of my family have different tastes in food, so, we often argue when we go out to eat.
Of course, I don\'t fight with my parents.
>> Correct
My parents like Korean food.
>> Correct
My sister,too.
>> My sister does, too.
I will eat the food I want, too!
>> I will eat the food that I want, too!
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