When I feel demotivated

2021-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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When I feel demotivated I trying to relax and think positively. When it’s not working, I read some book to get advice. Until now I always overcome it with these methods but I guess someday I will face with hardship that I’ve never experienced before. So from now on I have to practice how to control it.

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When I feel demotivated I trying to relax and think positively. 
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When it’s not working, I read some book to get advice. 
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Until now I always overcome it with these methods but I guess someday I will face with hardship that I’ve never experienced before. 
>>Until now, I always overcome it with these methods but I guess someday I will face with hardship that I’ve never experienced before. 

So from now on I have to practice how to control it.
>>CORRECT

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