When i forgot my best friend’s birthday.

2019-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Last year, i forgot my best friend’s birthday. I don’t remeber why. But, i realized my friend’s birthday a month later. And then, i texted a messeage to my friend and apologized. Also, i sent a present! After that, i set an alarm for my friend’s birthday and wrote down on my diary. At that time, i was so surprised because she always celebrate my birthday. So, i decided that i will never forget her birthday as same as she has done.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Please take note of your spelling and capitalization.

You made some good sentences here.

The two things I mentioned above are very important especially since you will also be taking a writing test.

Always practice right.

~~ Teacher Sharon

Last year, i forgot my best friend’s birthday. I don’t remeber why. But, i realized my friend’s birthday a month later.

>> Last year, I forgot my best friend’s birthday. 

I don’t remeber why.

>> I don\'t remember the reason.

But, i realized my friend’s birthday a month later.

>> I just realized that I had forgotten my friend\'s birthday a month later.
And then, i texted a messeage to my friend and apologized.

>> That\'s when I sent a text message to my friend to apologize.

Also, i sent a present!

>> I also sent a present.
After that, i set an alarm for my friend’s birthday and wrote down on my diary.

>> After that, I set a reminder for my friend’s birthday and wrote it down in my diary. 
At that time, i was so surprised because she always celebrate my birthday.

>> At that time, I was so surprised because she always greeted me on my birthday.
 So, i decided that i will never forget her birthday as same as she has done.

>>  So, I decided that I must never forget her birthday the same way she hasn\'t forgotten mine.

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