When I go to the trip.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I go to the trip, I will bring my camera.
Because I can take lots of photos where I go and see.
Whenever I see pictures where I went before,I can remember.
That's why I want to bring my camera for trip.
강사 첨삭
That's a good idea. Nice article.:) -Teacher JM
When I go to the trip, I will bring my camera.
>>>Whenever I go to a trip, I bring my camera.Because I can take lots of photos where I go and see and meet.
>>>Because I could take lots of photos of places that I go to and people that I see and meet.So, whenever I see pictures where I went before,that's why I want to bring my camera where I go to.
>>>So now, I can see pictures of where I went before. that's why I want to bring my camera wherever I go.
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