When I got feeling down, I ride a bicycle.
학생이 쓴 원문
I always rode a bicycle when I was young.
This habit makes my muscle strong and have a good condition.
I bought a motorcycle.
And I am now a owner of a car.
I always enjoying a riding when I got feeling down.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^^
Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s a good practice to improve your writing and grammar skills. I\'m happy to read your composition. ^^
This habit makes my muscle strong and have a good condition.
>>>This habit made my muscles strong and in good condition.
I bought a motorcycle. And I am now a owner of a car.
>>> I bought a motorcycle and I am now an owner of a car.
I always enjoying a riding when I got feeling down.
>>>I always enjoy riding when I\'m feeling down.
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