When I had to change how I speak.
학생이 쓴 원문
Many years ago, when I was a university student, I participated in a counselling festival.
My job was counseling students.
So, I had to speak and act professionally.
It required time and efforts.
However, it was very fun and memorable.
So, I still remember it to this day.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
This is a good composition.
You were able to paint the story in detail.
Good job!
Keep it up!
~~ Teacher Sharon
Many years ago, when I was a university student, I participated in a counselling festival.
>> Many years ago, when I was a university student, I participated in a counseling festival.
My job was counseling students.
>> My role was to counsel the students.
So, I had to speak and act professionally.
>> Correct
It required time and efforts.
>> It required a lot of time and effort.
However, it was very fun and memorable.
>> Correct
So, I still remember it to this day.
>> Correct
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