When I have a request to my boss, I simply bear it or meet my boss personally.
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Jean
During I have worked at the factory,I have not feel any trouble with my work because it is a easy job.
>> During the time that I worked at the factory, I did not encounter any issues with my work because it was an easy job.
The work course was simply a hand using procedure and I had no trouble doing that.Now I am resting at home studying english.
>> The work course was simply a hand-using procedure and I had no trouble doing that. Now, I am resting at home studying English.
My boss is a kind person maybe.
>> I think that my boss is a kind person.
Today I received a lecture concerning job-related thing which is containing the courtesy in factory.
>> Today, I underwent a lecture concerning job-related things such as courtesy in the factory.
Tomorrow I will get a interview to work at factory handling a semi-conductor product.
>> I will have an interview tomorrow at a factory handling a semi-conductor product.
Bye.
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