When I have any trouble at work.....

2013-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

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When I have any trouble at work, my husband be able to help me. My husband is a senior from my major and we first met in 1993. It's been sixteen years since we got married. He is a business partner. He & I quarrel sometimes but he is my best friend and a drinking buddy. haha~

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Hello there, 

It\'s nice to know that you and your husband are best friends, to help you with your troubles.

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T. Lorraine
When I have any trouble at work, my husband be able to help me.

>>When I have any trouble at work, my husband helps me.

My husband is a senior from my major and we first met in 1993.

>>My husband was a senior in my major and we met in 1993.

It\'s been sixteen years since we got married.

>>correct

>>We\'ve been married for sixteen years.

He is a business partner.

>>He is a businessman.

He & I quarrel sometimes but he is my best friend and a drinking buddy. haha~

>>sometimes, we quarrel but, he is my best friend and drinking buddy. hahaha

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