When I have any trouble at work.....
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Hello there,
It\'s nice to know that you and your husband are best friends, to help you with your troubles.
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T. Lorraine
When I have any trouble at work, my husband be able to help me.
>>When I have any trouble at work, my husband helps me.
My husband is a senior from my major and we first met in 1993.
>>My husband was a senior in my major and we met in 1993.
It\'s been sixteen years since we got married.
>>correct
>>We\'ve been married for sixteen years.
He is a business partner.
>>He is a businessman.
He & I quarrel sometimes but he is my best friend and a drinking buddy. haha~
>>sometimes, we quarrel but, he is my best friend and drinking buddy. hahaha
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