When I heard of Philippines first,

2017-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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It comes up with Cebu and Boracai, When I think of Philippines. Because, The islands are my whish lists for travelling. I'd like to have a vacations at that place with my family peacefully. Until now, my wife and I wanna go to the historical site preferentially. So, we didn't go to the vacation spot. But nowadays, my family are getting tired for parenting.So, I want to go to the Cebu for the vacation

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!^^

Happy Wednesday! (^___^)


Thank you so much for this composition.

If ever you\'ll go to the Philippines, I recommend you to visit Palawan instead.

Palawan has over 1,700 islands and islets, and with a coastline spanning 2,000 kilometers, it is everything a water and beach lover can ever ask for.

There you can spend time in in Coron, Puerto Princesa, or El Nido.

See you later in class!


_T. Mayleen :)


It comes up with Cebu and Boracai, When I think of Philippines.

>> I think of Cebu and Boracay whenever I hear the word Philippines.


Because, The islands are my whish lists for travelling.

>> It\'s because these islands are included in my wish list.


I\'d like to have a vacations at that place with my family peacefully.

>> I\'d like to spend vacation with my family in those places.


Until now, my wife and I wanna go to the historical site preferentially.

>> My wife and I have always preferred to go to historical sites.


So, we didn\'t go to the vacation spot.

>> That\'s why we haven\'t ben to other vacation spots yet.


But nowadays, my family are getting tired for parenting.

>> But nowadays, were getting tired of parenting.


So, I want to go to the Cebu for the vacation

>> I\'d like to go to Cebu for a vacation.

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