When I heard of Philippines first,
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Happy Wednesday! (^___^)
Thank you so much for this composition.
If ever you\'ll go to the Philippines, I recommend you to visit Palawan instead.
Palawan has over 1,700 islands and islets, and with a coastline spanning 2,000 kilometers, it is everything a water and beach lover can ever ask for.
There you can spend time in in Coron, Puerto Princesa, or El Nido.
See you later in class!
_T. Mayleen :)
It comes up with Cebu and Boracai, When I think of Philippines.
>> I think of Cebu and Boracay whenever I hear the word Philippines.
Because, The islands are my whish lists for travelling.
>> It\'s because these islands are included in my wish list.
I\'d like to have a vacations at that place with my family peacefully.
>> I\'d like to spend vacation with my family in those places.
Until now, my wife and I wanna go to the historical site preferentially.
>> My wife and I have always preferred to go to historical sites.
So, we didn\'t go to the vacation spot.
>> That\'s why we haven\'t ben to other vacation spots yet.
But nowadays, my family are getting tired for parenting.
>> But nowadays, were getting tired of parenting.
So, I want to go to the Cebu for the vacation
>> I\'d like to go to Cebu for a vacation.
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