When I marry, I think about these important things!!

There are many things to think when I marry. the most important thing is love. I want to marry with the one who loves me. of course, that means I love that girl. Love make it possible to overcome what seems like impossible. Many married couple get over their hardtime with their love. if they didn't have true emotion, they already have been divorced. The second important thing is her thought. For example, Thought about education is important our baby. we will reach the time, our kid(s) grow up and graduate high school. If my kid want to study more about his(her) interest, I will support his(her) education. Thought about value is important too, My occupation is soldier. In Korea, Soldier earns little money. so My wife is disapointed, If she have a value on fame or fortune. the last one is her background. I am not a rich guy, but I want to marry with rich girl, if she is satisfied those two things. because money can make our life comfortable.

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There are many things to think when I marry.

>> There are many things to think about before I get married.
the most important thing is love.

>> The most important thing is love.

I want to marry with the one who loves me.

>> I want to marry the one who loves me.
of course, that means I love that girl.

>> Of course, that means that I love that girl.
Love make it possible to overcome what seems like impossible.

>> Love makes it possible to overcome what seems like impossible.
Many married couple get over their hardtime with their love.

>> Correct! [hard times]
if they didn\'t have true emotion, they already have been divorced.

>> If they don\'t have true emotions, they will get divorced sooner or later.
The second important thing is her thought.

>> The second important thing is her thoughts.
For example, Thought about education is important our baby.

>> For example, her thoughts about education is important for our baby.
we will reach the time, our kid(s) grow up and graduate high school.

>> There will come a time, when our kid(s) will grow up and graduate from high school.
If my kid want to study more about his(her) interest, I will support his(her) education.

>> If my kids wants to study more on/about her/his interests, I will support her/his education.
Thought about value is important too, My occupation is soldier.

>> Her thoughts about values is important, too. I am a soldier.
In Korea, Soldier earns little money.

>> In Korea, soldiers earn little money.

so My wife is disapointed, If she have a value on fame or fortune.

>> If  she values fame or fortune, my wife will be disappointed. 
the last one is her background.

>> The last one is her background.
I am not a rich guy, but I want to marry with rich girl, if she is satisfied those two things.

>> I am not a rich guy, but I want to marry a rich girl, so that she will satisfy those two things mentioned above.
because money can make our life comfortable.

>> This is because money can make our lives comfortable.^^