When I meet new person, I always salute to him first.

2019-05-06 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I generally have a lot of private things not to be showed to person that I don\'t know. I don\'t enjoy meeting a new person in these days because I have to study some subjects for test. When I drive my own car I see many people through the car window. And when I drive my motorcycle I am come to see many street walkers who walking or running the street or pave way. Usually, when I meet someone new, I feel awkward and shy. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks again for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great day ☺

I generally have a lot of private things not to be showed to person that I don\'t know.
>> I generally keep my privacy to strangers.

I don\'t enjoy meeting a new person in these days because I have to study some subjects for test.
>> I don\'t enjoy meeting new people because I am busy studying for my upcoming tests.

When I drive my own car I see many people through the car window.
>> I see many people when I drive my car through my car window.

And when I drive my motorcycle I am come to see many street walkers who walking or running the street or pave way.
>> I also see a lot of people when I ride my motorcycle.

Usually, when I meet someone new, I feel awkward and shy.
>> CORRECT

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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