When I study alone, I feel like it is doing well to study.
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When I go to library, I study with other students who keep quiet.
>> When I go to library, I study with other students who are quiet.
It is nice surrounding to study.
>> It\'s a nice place to study.
My room is always messy around so I can\'t focus my concentration on study.
>> My room is always messy so I can\'t focus studying.
>> OR: My room is always messy so I can\'t concentrate on studying.
So I go to public library.
>> So, I go to the library.
This morning I went to the toilet and it gives me a bit sick stomach.
>> This morning, I went to the toilet because I had a stomachache.
I am a bit nervous about it.
>> CORRECT
Some blood is out of my body.
>> I bled.
Thanks for reading.
>> CORRECT
bye.
>> Goodbye.
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