When I study alone, I feel like it is doing well to study.

2019-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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When I go to library, I study with other students who keep quiet. It is nice surrounding to study. My room is always messy around so I can\'t focus my concentration on study. So I go to public library. This morning I went to the toilet and it gives me a bit sick stomach. I am a bit nervous about it. Some blood is out of my body. Thanks for reading. bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great day ☺


When I go to library, I study with other students who keep quiet.

>> When I go to library, I study with other students who are quiet.


It is nice surrounding to study.

>> It\'s a nice place to study.


My room is always messy around so I can\'t focus my concentration on study.

>> My room is always messy so I can\'t focus studying.

>> OR: My room is always messy so I can\'t concentrate on studying.


So I go to public library.

>> So, I go to the library.


This morning I went to the toilet and it gives me a bit sick stomach.

>> This morning, I went to the toilet because I had a stomachache.


I am a bit nervous about it.

>> CORRECT


Some blood is out of my body.

>> I bled.


Thanks for reading.

>> CORRECT


bye.

>> Goodbye.

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