When I think of my future..
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When I think of my future, I think of the people around me and my home. The people around me have grown old and grown as much as time has passed, and I can imagine my house, which has become an old building because it is old. It is fun to imagine such things, but also sad at the same time. Also, when I think of my future, I think of myself with a job. Personally, what I find fun these days is voice acting. It\'s fun to imagine myself becoming a voice actor.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
When I think of my future, I think of the people around me and my home.
>>> CORRECT!
The people around me have grown old and grown as much as time has passed, and I can imagine my house, which has become an old building because it is old.
>>> CORRECT!
It is fun to imagine such things, but also sad at the same time.
>>> CORRECT!
Also, when I think of my future, I think of myself with a job.
>>> CORRECT!
Personally, what I find fun these days is voice acting.
>>> CORRECT!
It\'s fun to imagine myself becoming a voice actor.
>>> CORRECT!
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