When I think of peace, the Liberity statue is booming in my mind.
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When I think of peace, the Liberity statue is booming in my mind.
>> When I think of peace, the Statue of Liberty is booms in my mind.
Your question is too hard to imagine immediately.
>> Your question is too hard for me to imagine immediately.
My computer is upgraded yesterday night.
>> My computer was upgraded yesterday night.
Health administers to peace of mind.
>>Correct
I just want some peace and quiet.
>> I just want peace and quiet life.
Typoon hit Korea peninsular again.
>>A typhoon hit Korea peninsular again
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