When I told to a famous person for the first time.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
What an interesting experience.
That must have been terrible to hear as a child.
I\'m glad you got over that.
Please take note of how you begin your sentences.
Stick to the basics and avoid using unnecessary words.
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I was little, I saw a comedian for the first time.
>> Correct
I was surprised and so excited.
>> Correct
So, I called his name like friend.
>> I called his name like he was my friend.
And then, his manager told me that he is not my friend.
>> His manager told me that he was not my friend.
At that time, I was a elementary students, I was just excited.
>> I was only in elementary school that time so I just felt excited.
After that, I felt gloomy and I wasn\'t excited.
>> After he said that, I felt disappointed.
The comedian who I met can\'t be seen in the TV anymore because he has gamble.
>> The comedian I\'m referring to isn\'t on TV anymore because he was a gambler.
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