When I want to make person to change, I talked alot.

2014-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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When I want to make person to change, I talked alot. It is not the right answer but I think It is important to know one's thought. I become to know the thought of the person, and why the person do the action or make problem. Understanding one's action must be the first solution of the problem. and then, helping to think about the other aspect of one's doing is following step. but It is adapted in idle condition. In real situation, It is very uneasy to stay calm, when you get anger. Of course, it is detour way to persuade someone. However, When anger is added, It is more faster than persuasion. People tend to don't listen advice or caution. So, anger is used by means of empasis

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Hello there [이름]! Thank you for sending this in. ^^ I do agree with you. The actions of a person is really important when dealing with their personality. It is better for us to know them better first. Have a good night! Take Care!Teacher Nina   When I want to make person to change, I talked alot. >> When I want to make person to change, I talk a lot.It is not the right answer but I think It is important to know one\'s thought. >> Correct! I become to know the thought of the person, and why the person do the action or make problem. >> Did you mean: I was able to know the thoughts of the person and why he/she acts that way that might cause some problems. Understanding one\'s action must be the first solution of the problem. >> Correct!and then, helping to think about the other aspect of one\'s doing is following step. >> And then, helping him/ her to think about the other aspects of his/her actions is the next step. >> OR: And then, helping the person to think about the other aspects of his/ her actions is the next step.but It is adapted in idle condition. >> But it is adapted in an idle condition.In real situation, It is very uneasy to stay calm, when you get anger. >> Did you meanIn real situation, it is not comfortable to stay calm when you\'re mad. >> OR: In real situation, it is not not easy to stay calm when you are mad.Of course, it is detour way to persuade someone. >> Of course, it is a detour way to persuade someone. However, When anger is added, It is more faster than persuasion.>> However, when anger is added it is faster than persuasion. People tend to don\'t listen advice or caution. >> People tend not to listen to advices or warning.So, anger is used by means of empasis >> So anger is used by means of emphasis.

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