When I was a student..

2010-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 lina

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Although I am walking for my company ,I was once a student. So I am trying to recall my school days. I think the happiest time in my life was my college days. At that time , I had no stress because there was nothing to worry about. In Every weekdays , I went to school with my friend Since he had his own car , we did car pool to school. In class , I studied hard. I had never missed any class in my entire college days. Frankly, I am not the person showing off. but I was granted a full tuition scholarshp twice in college. my parents are still proud of that. My classes were usually finished by 6 p.m After those classes , I would hang out with my friend or play some sports like soccer or basketball

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Hi [이름].I guess you had a great experience on your college days.I didn't expect that you did well in your days but that was no surprise because you got hired in Samsung.Well-respected by your co-workers because of your diligent decision.Thanks for sharing.Have a great weekedn.See you in class on Monday!   LINA   Although I am walking for my company >> Although I am walking to go to my company ,I was once a student. >>I’m once a studentSo I am trying to recall my school days. >> So I am trying to recall my school days. I think the happiest time in my life was my college days. >>CorrectAt that time , I had no stress because there was nothing to worryabout. >>CorrectIn Every weekdays , >>every weekdays. I went to school with my friend >>Correct Since he had his own car , we did car pool to school. >> Since he had his own car, we car pool in school. In class , I studied hard.>>Correct I had never missed any class in my entire college days.>>CorrectFrankly, I am not the person showing off.>>Correctbut I was granted a full tuition scholarshp twice in college.>>But I was granted twice full tuition scholarship in college.my parents are still proud of that.>>CorrectMy classes were usually finished by 6 p.m >>CorrectAfter those classes , I would hang out with my friend >>Corrector play some sports like soccer or basketball >>correct  

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