When I was a student..
학생이 쓴 원문
Although I am walking for my company
,I was once a student.
So I am trying to recall my school days.
I think the happiest time in my life was my college days.
At that time , I had no stress because there was nothing to worry
about.
In Every weekdays , I went to school with my friend
Since he had his own car , we did car pool to school.
In class , I studied hard.
I had never missed any class in my entire college days.
Frankly, I am not the person showing off.
but I was granted a full tuition scholarshp twice in college.
my parents are still proud of that.
My classes were usually finished by 6 p.m
After those classes , I would hang out with my friend
or play some sports like soccer or basketball
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름].I guess you had a great experience on your college days.I didn't expect that you did well in your days but that was no surprise because you got hired in Samsung.Well-respected by your co-workers because of your diligent decision.Thanks for sharing.Have a great weekedn.See you in class on Monday!
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Although I am walking for my company
>> Although I am walking to go to my company
,I was once a student.
>>I’m once a studentSo I am trying to recall my school days.
>> So I am trying to recall my school days.
I think the happiest time in my life was my college days.
>>CorrectAt that time , I had no stress because there was nothing to worryabout.
>>CorrectIn Every weekdays ,
>>every weekdays.
I went to school with my friend
>>Correct
Since he had his own car , we did car pool to school.
>> Since he had his own car, we car pool in school.
In class , I studied hard.>>Correct I had never missed any class in my entire college days.>>CorrectFrankly, I am not the person showing off.>>Correctbut I was granted a full tuition scholarshp twice in college.>>But I was granted twice full tuition scholarship in college.my parents are still proud of that.>>CorrectMy classes were usually finished by 6 p.m
>>CorrectAfter those classes , I would hang out with my friend
>>Corrector play some sports like soccer or basketball
>>correct
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