When I was in middle school,,,
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was in middle school, I experienced something cool.
At that time, I was in 2nd grade in middle school and I was preparing mid-term exam.
There were a lot of subjects which I had to memorize. but the one of the hardest subject was Chinese character.
As you know Chinese chararer is nearly limitless and the shape of it is totaly different one from another.
So I needed to spend a lot of time studying Chinese character.
the day before having Chinese charater test, I had a strange dream.
threre were lots of chinese character which I memorized.
I was studying while dreaming!!
So I could get a good score in Chinese character, It was very wired but best memory about studying.
As I aspired to get a good score in mid-term exam, probably which made me dream a this dream.
I want to have that kind of dream, Since I had that.
But I couldn't, maybe I wasn't desperate.
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What a strange dream! I am curious.
What a strange dream! I am curious.
Did you get a good score? Were you able to remember all of the characters that you studied?
I think you did. Hihihihi! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
Have a great weekend. Take care!
Teacher Nina
>> correct
At that time, I was in 2nd grade in middle school and I was preparing mid-term exam.
At that time, I was in 2nd grade in middle school and I was preparing mid-term exam.
>> At that time, I was a second grade student in middle school and I was preparing for my mid-term exam.
There were a lot of subjects which I had to memorize. but the one of the hardest subject was Chinese character.
There were a lot of subjects which I had to memorize. but the one of the hardest subject was Chinese character.
>> There were a lot of subjects which I had to study but the hardest one was Chinese characters.
As you know Chinese chararer is nearly limitless and the shape of it is totaly different one from another.
As you know Chinese chararer is nearly limitless and the shape of it is totaly different one from another.
>> As you know, Chinese characters is nearly limitless and the shape of its letters are totally different from one another.
So I needed to spend a lot of time studying Chinese character.
So I needed to spend a lot of time studying Chinese character.
>> correct
the day before having Chinese charater test, I had a strange dream.
the day before having Chinese charater test, I had a strange dream.
>> The day before having my Chinese character test, I had a strange dream.
>> OR: A day before my Chinese test, I had a strange dream.
threre were lots of chinese character which I memorized.
threre were lots of chinese character which I memorized.
>> correct
I was studying while dreaming!!
I was studying while dreaming!!
>> correct
So I could get a good score in Chinese character, It was very wired but best memory about studying.
So I could get a good score in Chinese character, It was very wired but best memory about studying.
>> So I could get a good score in Chinese subject, it was very weird but that was the best memory I had while I was studying.
As I aspired to get a good score in mid-term exam, probably which made me dream a this dream.
As I aspired to get a good score in mid-term exam, probably which made me dream a this dream.
>> As I aspired to get a good score in my mid-term exam, probably it was the one which made me to have a dream like this.
I want to have that kind of dream, Since I had that.
>> I want to have that kind of dream again, since I experienced it.
But I couldn\'t, maybe I wasn\'t desperate.
But I couldn\'t, maybe I wasn\'t desperate.
>> But I couldn\'t, maybe I\'m not that desperate now.
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