When I was in the Philippines..

2010-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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I've been to Philippines last year to study English. I stayed in Cebu for 2months in an English Academy's dormitory. In the dormitory, I had chances to get to know many friends who came from Korea, China and Japan. That's where I met my boyfriend. While I stayed in Cebu, the most exciting experience is that I got my certificate of scuba diving. Usually, I'm not interested in extreme sports but at that time, I didn't want to waste of my time in there but wanted to do something special and memorable. Thanks to my experiences in Philippines, I've changed to be little bit more active. I wish I could visit there again in the future.

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Hello [이름], I'm really happy to receive a composition from you. I encourage you to write more. Thank you for sharing about your experience in Cebu. I think it is beautiful place. I wish to go there. ^^ Can you speak Cebuano? Maayong buntag! I'm excited to talk to you in the class. Take care, Verna I've been to Philippines last year to study English. >> I have been in the Philippines last year to study English.I stayed in Cebu for 2months in an English Academy's dormitory. >> CorrectIn the dormitory, I had chances to get to know many friends who came from Korea, China and Japan. >>CorrectThat's where I met my boyfriend. >> Correct While I stayed in Cebu, the most exciting experience is that I got my certificate of scuba diving. >> While I stayed in Cebu, the most exciting experience was that I got my certificate of scuba diving.Usually, I'm not interested in extreme sports but at that time, I didn't want to waste of my time in there but wanted to do something special and memorable. >> I'm not usually interested in extreme sports at that time, but I didn't want to waste my time so I wanted to do something special and memorable.Thanks to my experiences in Philippines, I've changed to be little bit more active. >> Thanks to my experience in the Philippines, I became a little bit more active.I wish I could visit there again in the future. >> Correct  

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