When I was in the Philippines..
학생이 쓴 원문
I've been to Philippines last year to study English.
I stayed in Cebu for 2months in an English Academy's dormitory.
In the dormitory, I had chances to get to know many friends who came from Korea, China and Japan.
That's where I met my boyfriend.
While I stayed in Cebu, the most exciting experience is that I got my certificate of scuba diving.
Usually, I'm not interested in extreme sports but at that time, I didn't want to waste of my time in there but wanted to do something special and memorable.
Thanks to my experiences in Philippines, I've changed to be little bit more active.
I wish I could visit there again in the future.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I'm really happy to receive a composition from you.
I encourage you to write more. Thank you for sharing
about your experience in Cebu. I think it is beautiful place.
I wish to go there. ^^ Can you speak Cebuano?
Maayong buntag! I'm excited to talk to you in the class.
Take care,
Verna
I've been to Philippines last year to study English.
>> I have been in the Philippines last year to study English.I stayed in Cebu for 2months in an English Academy's dormitory.
>> CorrectIn the dormitory, I had chances to get to know many friends who came from Korea, China and Japan.
>>CorrectThat's where I met my boyfriend.
>> Correct While I stayed in Cebu, the most exciting experience is that I got my certificate of scuba diving.
>> While I stayed in Cebu, the most exciting experience was that I got my certificate of scuba diving.Usually, I'm not interested in extreme sports but at that time, I didn't want to waste of my time in there but wanted to do something special and memorable.
>> I'm not usually interested in extreme sports at that time, but I didn't want to waste my time so I wanted to do something special and memorable.Thanks to my experiences in Philippines, I've changed to be little bit more active.
>> Thanks to my experience in the Philippines, I became a little bit more active.I wish I could visit there again in the future.
>> Correct
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