When I went to the cinema the first time

2023-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I can\'t remember when I went to the cinema the first time. I think maybe I went to the cinema in 2019. I was in the 3rd grade. I went with my cousin and watched \'How to Train Your Dragon: The Hidden World\'. I was really excited then. However, I don\'t remember the story exactly now. I want to watch another movies with my friends.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
It\'s good for you to practice your expressions.
They will be very useful in daily communication.
It will expand your horizon and vocabulary.^^
~~Teacher Sharon
I can\'t remember when I went to the cinema the first time.
>> I can\'t remember the first time I went to the cinema.
I think maybe I went to the cinema in 2019.
>> I think, maybe, I went to the cinema in 2019.
I was in the 3rd grade.
>> Correct
I went with my cousin and watched \'How to Train Your Dragon: The Hidden World\'.
>> Correct
I was really excited then.
>> Correct
However, I don\'t remember the story exactly now.
>> However, I don\'t remember the exact story now.
I want to watch another movies with my friends.
>> I want to watch other movies with my friends.

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