When is an age gap beneficial, and when is it a hindrance?

2014-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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In the Korean society, age is very important. We have been educated to respect our elders especially because our society is based on Confucianism. In the Confucian-dominated society, the age hierarchy plays a significant factor in all aspects of our life. You could be regarded as being rude when you rebut or express your opinions that are different from your senior’s. So being older has a lot of advantages in socializing with others. However, there are also disadvantages. Your age could be a hindrance or a major drawback to get a job or to get promoted at the workplace when you are over certain age regardless of your experience and competency. The Korean society is not an exception from the trend of fast changes in all of the areas. In the fast developing society, young people are taking place of the roles of older people and pushing away the elders. It is true that the age gap is getting meaningless in the modern society. Noone will respect you just because you are older than him.

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Good afternoon Sir [이름] ^_^ Thanks for another great composition from you. I was able to understand more your culture or traditions. I am happy to help you and learn at the same time. I hope that this day is going well with you. Have a terrific Thursday. Teacher Nina   In the Korean society, age is very important. >> Correct! >> OR: In Korean society, age is significant. We have been educated to respect our elders especially because our society is based on Confucianism. >> Correct! In the Confucian-dominated society, the age hierarchy plays a significant factor in all aspects of our life. >> Correct! You could be regarded as being rude when you rebut or express your opinions that are different from your senior’s. >> Correct! So being older has a lot of advantages in socializing with others. >> Correct! However, there are also disadvantages. >> Correct! Your age could be a hindrance or a major drawback to get a job or to get promoted at the workplace when you are over certain age regardless of your experience and competency. >> Your age could be a hindrance or a major drawback to get a job or to get promoted at the workplace when you are over a certain age regardless of your experience and competency. The Korean society is not an exception from the trend of fast changes in all of the areas. >> Correct! >> OR: Korean society is not exempted from the changes happen in all aspects. In the fast developing society, young people are taking place of the roles of older people and pushing away the elders. >> Correct! It is true that the age gap is getting meaningless in the modern society. >> Correct! Noone will respect you just because you are older than him. >> Correct! ( No one ^^)

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