When is not communicating the best? Share your answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think a communication doesn’t progress when people are having a personal thought in their mind and don’t concentrate on what others are saying.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Judy!
You are totally right about this. If we must listen, we have to free our minds devoid of prejudice and judgements.
Great job on your answer. Note down the simple suggestions I made.
See you in class today!
-T. Donna =)
I think a communication doesn’t progress when people are having a personal thought in their mind and don’t concentrate on what others are saying
>> I think communication doesn’t progress when people are having personal thoughts in their mind and don’t concentrate on what others are saying.
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